Malavika A
Your eyes,
The wizards magic wand
Which doesn't spare me
From it's spell.
Your voice,
The hypnotist's clock
Which sends me into a
Happy oblivion.
Your lips,
The soft edges of
Pashmina silk
Which gives me goosebumps .
Your skin,
The golden dazzle
Of the sun,
Which traps me impulsively.
You, the prince
Of a fairy tale,
Who makes a damsel
Fall in love!
I really liked the way this is written. The words give out a strong feeling of things that are depicted. It has a nice rhythm to it!
It’s really nice. But for me it’s a bit too cheesy but I realize that it has it’s own beauty and for the first time I have actually been able to appreciate something so simple yet so beautiful.