If not you... There would be none

Sana Fatima

You can keep your world blue,
whence mine lies in black.
And yet its me who steals all the fun,
with you engrossed in the chemistry lab.

You maybe hurt and yet smile,
my anger is my frown.
Atkins, Willard for you maybe fine,
prose and poetry are enough for me to drown.

How much we love books!!!
I thought;
"the only common interest".
What luck! My Romeo quantum is definitely not....
While physical is your Juliet.

They say we are poles apart,
but the latitude we stand on is one.
I won't mind if the time we spent together.... restarts....
for if not you, there would be none....


18 comments

  • Itz awsm….jz lyk uhhhh…

    Eram
  • This poem is the best example of college love… CHEMISTRY, BOOKS, ROMEO, JULIET AND WHAT NOT…. Poem shows the passion of the poet…..

    Anonymous
  • This is awesome, keep it up ?

    Imran
  • Woww..i m stunned..your choice of wrds nd the flow were both nicely done as well as tha structure…very nicely writtn..??

    Tasneem
  • Woww..i m stunned..your choice of wrds nd the flow were both nicely done as well as tha structure…very nicely writtn..??

    Tasneem
  • Still that marian left…. Beautiful poem… Btw CONGRATS

    Mohammad Hammad
  • You are the best my sis…. it’s very beautiful …you are such a talented girl…

    Adil
  • Damn your sense of writting is too good… And i was just stopped for a while after reading your poem.. I really don’t know what to say… But seriously in my views you are just quite amazing….. This is beyond words….

    U nvr knew
  • One of the best piece of writing. Depicting the true feeling ,presented in the best frame work of poetry.
    Good keep writing .?

    Well wisher
  • I think may be physical is his juliet but definitely Bio-inorganic is his tinny heart whis is vibrating too much now a days due to key (lock-key model).

    Alam,
  • Beautifully written…

    Maryam
  • “If not you there would be none….”.. The title says it all…. Simple yet awsum

    Zaina
  • beautiful…

    Fatima
  • it is beautiful…nd i cn fully understnd the reason behind it ..???keep going meri jaan

    Ur Selfie Partner
  • From a friend to fan.. says the coversion of man..
    Autograph plz?

    saboor
  • It’s beautifully written , n especially I like the ending…
    This type of writing shows the simplicity of the written too… Btw u seems to be a like a talented n lucky written..though

    Friend
  • Wow

    Ali
  • Simply love the first three lines of the poem! It’s beautiful ?

    Abhivyakti

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