Brishti Roy
I refuse to fall -
Fall in love,
Or into a puddle
Or down the stairs
And scratch my knees,
bruise my arms,
or heart.
I wish to fly -
Fly in love.
i mean -
Ride (on) Sire Cupid,
Kiss his wings,
Steal his awkward arrow,
And stab the bastard in his heart.
Once and for all.
And then I will fall
Right into love.
Red, Blue, Green,
Sin, no sin,
Purged and pure
Just to be sure
I'll never have to fall again.
This is sooo soo pretty
Oh my god! This is so so amazing!
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Love the concept. ♥️
Amazing!!
Couldn’t had been more blissful, straight out of heart!❤
“I refuse to fall
Fall in love
Or into a puddle
Or down the stair …..”
“I wish to fly -
Fly in love ….”
Straight thought & a class one !
Keep it up.
- Mahavir.
The imagery used is raw and burning. Quite the opposite of the very sublime song by Presley. Nice work! ❤
The imagery used is raw and burning. Quite the opposite of the very sublime song by Presley. Nice work! ❤
I wish I could quote a single line here, your poetry is just too beautiful to be presented in pieces. Amazing work Brishti !
Beautifully captured, the emotions of the one who doesn’t wish to fall in love again. Great work!
And then I will fall
Right into love.
Red, Blue, Green,
Sin, no sin,
Purged and pure
Just to be sure
I’ll never have to fall again.
This stanza just made it more beautiful!! Pure!
This is simply exquisite.
“Ride (on) Sire Cupid,
Kiss his wings,
Steal his awkward arrow,
And stab the bastard in his heart.
Once and for all.
And then I will fall
Right into love.”
This is just… wow.
Beautiful
Nicely written
Fantastic, keep going
Absolutely Beautiful love the lines “I wish to fly fly in love” :)
Remarkable !!!!!