When You Come

IHCIRT_LAWROP

When the Sun will set tonight, 

Deep buried desires will ignite;

To uncover the shadowed regions of this myriad through fingers of lust,  love & might.

The lamp is burning the midnight oil;

As the couch gets ready for yield & Toil.

 

As you cross my abode's threshold, my heart wants to cross the limit ;

My body aspires to win the battles of pleasure & pain.

Only to lose the innocence of virginity & sane.

For once in life,  I win the match after losing my only Wicket!

 

Your fingers wander into the places sensored,

Your lips leave marks to soothe my skin,

As the spaces between us decrease by a million at a time,

We cherish together the savory taste of this Sin.

 

Your touch gets intense with every wink,

As you explore the insides of my thighs,

And stroke my bosom with your manly grip,

I swim around your perfect proportions, Waist-down I Sink.

 

Fleets away the night,  as we entangle in each other,

Engulfed in wetness; Exploring, till the depths couldn't go any deeper.

Seducing in the arousing fire of hot mess ;

We taste the forbidden fruit & We couldn't care less.

 

You nestle calmly inside my bust,  as the midnight oil burns,

I sleep over you,  dreamless & peacefully.

The adventure has reached its final destination.

My lamp still burns modestly.

 


10 comments

  • Thanks a lot Rishika Di
    :)

    IHCIRT_LAWROP
  • Each and every line is full of romance and true feelings..
    Well done.

    Rishika
  • Thanks a lot Anvika :) correctly understanding the meaning of the last line was very thoughtful of u!

    IHCIRT_LAWROP
  • ’’The adventure has reached its final destination.

    My lamp still burns modestly.’’ the ending is so beautiful. The midnight oil has slowly burned away into the darkness, but the inner lamp which can be personified into so many different aspects presents a witty ending to the reader.
    I also love how calmly the wild emotions have been described, which is a tricky thing to do. Kudos!

    Avnika
  • Thanks Kuldeep
    :)

    IHCIRT_LAWROP
  • Fantastic poem, every line is so romantic.
    What a great potrey of ‘when you come’.

    Kuldeep
  • Thanks for the valuable feedback Ricky, Anupreeta & deepti
    :*

    IHCIRT_LAWROP
  • My favorite line is “For once in life, I win the match after losing my only Wicket!”. There is an innocence combined with sensuality in this poem. IHCIRT_LAWROP, you write elegant erotic poetry.

    Ricky Pundir
  • “Your fingers wander into the places sensored,

    Your lips leave marks to soothe my skin,

    As the spaces between us decrease by a million at a time,

    We cherish together the savory taste of this Sin." – Mesmerizing poetry! Seduction is an art and we portrayed it in the best way possible. Cheers!

    Anupreeta
  • “Your lips leave marks to soothe my skin.”- Amazing!!!

    Deepti

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