What's the worst?

Another Boy

Whom shall I choose to hug
The part of me you acceptedย 
Or our memories you openly denied?
It wasn't a rejection, at least!
I feel worse but not the worst
Unlike it happened the last time
What's the use of spilling out myself now?
The foetal intimacy had a child called emptiness
Give me an excuse to apologize
So that I can get rid of this severity
An emotion, at the most suicidal
Common ground for sympathy has vanished
And we've lost the old charm
Once you used to be picturesque
Today thee have grown senile
I can see some links prospering
Where was that endeavour about us?
Am I boring, to a fault?
I thought you loved my eloquence
Was on the threshold of confiding in you
Resisted, tackling thy rivers of sophistication
Oh my Lord! Many thanks for this redemption
And bestowing the kindness on me
Via one of your favourite sons or siblings

38 comments

  • Your poetry is food for soul mandy.
    Looking forward to more ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ

    Asmita
  • Excellent ๐Ÿ˜

    Mainak
  • It’s beautiful. โค

    Jaya
  • Nice poem gud job keep it up

    Arsh kabia
  • Heart touching. Very nice.

    Amandeep Kaur
  • Such a good poem…wish u success and happiness ๐ŸŒธ

    Simran
  • I hope you get your love!

    shigi
  • Great Job……. Keep it up… Gud luck…..

    Gagan Brar
  • Very nice

    Baldhir Bhullar
  • Nice๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘…

    JashanjK
  • So good.!

    Arushi
  • Very emotional & heart touching poem. Gud work dear. Keep it up.

    Raman Brar
  • Gud job man๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

    Keep it up๐Ÿ˜Š

    Lovepreet Singh
  • mindbolwing brow…no words for explain..

    Deepak
  • An emotion at most suicidal. โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

    Gurnav
  • It shakes me! These words: “The foetal intimacy had a child called emptiness”! Such depth in such simplicity!

    Keep writing!
    xoxo ๐Ÿ’—

    The girl who has a poetic crush on you! ;)
  • How beautifully expressed !

    Geet
  • Tantalizing …!!!
    Keep it up mate..!!!๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

    Aman Chauhan
  • Awesome work……

    karanvir singh
  • ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    Sushmit Chauhan
  • Vry nice๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    Disha
  • Beautiful poem.

    Pawanpreet singh
  • I loved it….keep up the good work mightโ™ฅโ™ฅ

    Sukhman
  • Amazing poetryโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜

    Mehak
  • Amazing… Keep it up

    Anamika
  • a poem with full of sadness. but the way of expressing your emotions is really very nice and appreciable.

    Neeraj Virdi
  • Very touching……. Full of emotions…..great job… Wish you all the best dear….

    Rekha
  • Wow nice poem and nice write.

    Manveer
  • Bro that’s really gr8 poetry …. Appreciate your work ! ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Shanu arora
  • Very nice

    Jugraj
  • Amazing poem โ˜บ๏ธ

    Amardeep Sihag
  • Its too good…full of emotions though sad but still its good to be sad…..

    Narinder Singh
  • Very NYC poem…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

    Navneet kaur
  • Great work man!
    I really liked it ๐Ÿ’œ

    Sahiba
  • This poem is a beautiful out burst of emotions..wish you success and love Another Boy โค

    Prabhjot kaur
  • Amazingโคโคโคโค…. Intenseโœ”โœ”โœ”โœ”โœ”

    Rajwinder
  • Fan of your writings…you surely gonna get the happiness dear ๐Ÿ˜Š …just stay connected with you poetic work..! ๐Ÿ˜

    Shyna
  • You can get everything you desire !! In love with your poetry ๐Ÿ’–lots of love!

    Archna Sharma

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