Ahel Choudhury
Scars turned into wounds
as you walked away from my life,
I kept on dreaming about us being together,
But the dreams came under the knife.
A tornado of emotions whirled across my heart,
I tried to express all those but all I managed to do
was to keep mum.
The plethora of pain caused by your separation is
immense,
I wonder how I shall battle out these mentally - draining
emotions that are so intense.
They often say brightness succeeds a dark day,
Waiting desperately for the day,
When the pain of losing you fades away.
Thank you all. Your valuable comments mean a lot. Keep supporting :)
Classic
It is indeed a awesome poem on romantism that’s touched my heart immensely on the Valentine Day. It is really mind blowing. Wising Poet Ahel a happy journey in this arena.
Awesome Bro. Sahi hai Kaviraj
Heart wrenching and relatable.
You rule, brother! :)
Dil Chuu leya ..☺
For future best of luck
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