By Samanya Sharma
i need you
to understand the
difference
between passion and poison.
between baring your
soul
and being
naked.
to feel your insides
combust
with just one touch
to feel the desire to
dissolve
yourself in them
to feel
complete
in their arms
is
Beautiful.
but
to feel your stomach
twist in knots and
corrode
to feel
broken
without their attention
to feel
lost
without them
is
Toxic.
Gr8 work Samanya. Its a masterpiece. Very well written and well knitted words mirroring the expressions.
Stay blessed and keep rocking.
Wow Samanya well done beta , all d best for ur bright future ??
Dear Samanya
Selection of words is explicit and shows the confidence which had developed in you .Very well thought .Best wishes for you always . congratulations
Very well written. Amazing. Keep it up. All the best.
Samanya rocks and her words rock even more. Can feel the torment and agony that’s gleaning among relationships. Every time you read, words take new meaning depending upon how pensive you are…Looking forward to some more, Samanya.
Good. Your style coveys angst of this generation ?
Dear Samanya , Very well written . keep going.. Daughters are like a treasure for the fathers and We all feel blessed have such a daughters.
Amazing..!
Wonderful..!
Sensational..!
Absolutely Gorgeous..!
You are having a Mature head on the Shoulders….!
God Bless…..Keep Shining…..Samanya..!
Very good expression of feeling
Best wishes
Very well composed Dear Angel. Good choice of words and lot of thought has gone into writing this. Keep up the good job we will await ur next composition. Blessings
Very well composed , Keep it up samanya. God Bless .?
Very well written….A wonderful composition….God bless you Samanyaa….!!!!
Speechless ,well composed Samannya…Keep it up…
It’s so mesmerising samanya keep the words moving so flawlessly God bless you
The composition is an indicator of not only your talent but it depicts internal churning going inside you.
Keep expressing.
God bless
Very well composed nd beautifully written …….keep it up ?
Good One
Amazing and beautiful.
Beautiful composition with simple words and deep routed meaning. Good show. Keep it up. God bless.
Beautiful composition. Keep it up.
Great expression of thoughts with simple words……..way to go….keep it up Samanya
God bless
Wonderful & meaningful composition Samanya , keep it up . All the best ??
Well composed Samanya!
Unimaginable thinking power of children.Keep it up.
Very well written….Keep up the good work
Dammnn. This is so amazing samanyaa. So well composed. ???
WOWOW this is so amazing ??❤️❤️❤️❤️??