Falling?

By Samanya Sharma

i need you

to understand the

difference

between passion and poison.

between baring your

soul

and being

naked.

to feel your insides

combust

with just one touch 

to feel the desire to

dissolve

yourself in them

to feel

complete

in their arms

is

Beautiful.

but

to feel your stomach

twist in knots and

corrode

to feel

broken

without their attention 

to feel

lost 

without them

is

Toxic.


27 comments

  • Gr8 work Samanya. Its a masterpiece. Very well written and well knitted words mirroring the expressions.
    Stay blessed and keep rocking.

    Prateik Dikshit
  • Wow Samanya well done beta , all d best for ur bright future ??

    Priyanka dubey
  • Dear Samanya
    Selection of words is explicit and shows the confidence which had developed in you .Very well thought .Best wishes for you always . congratulations

    Shashi dubey
  • Very well written. Amazing. Keep it up. All the best.

    Harendra Kumar
  • Samanya rocks and her words rock even more. Can feel the torment and agony that’s gleaning among relationships. Every time you read, words take new meaning depending upon how pensive you are…Looking forward to some more, Samanya.

    sudhanshu
  • Good. Your style coveys angst of this generation ?

    Gp. Capt. J Joseph
  • Dear Samanya , Very well written . keep going.. Daughters are like a treasure for the fathers and We all feel blessed have such a daughters.

    Pankaj Yadav
  • Amazing..!
    Wonderful..!
    Sensational..!
    Absolutely Gorgeous..!
    You are having a Mature head on the Shoulders….!
    God Bless…..Keep Shining…..Samanya..!

    Amit Karoria
  • Very good expression of feeling
    Best wishes

    R K Dhiman
  • Very well composed Dear Angel. Good choice of words and lot of thought has gone into writing this. Keep up the good job we will await ur next composition. Blessings

    Ganesh Bhatnagar
  • Very well composed , Keep it up samanya. God Bless .?

    Nitin Sharma
  • Very well written….A wonderful composition….God bless you Samanyaa….!!!!

    Sachet Arora
  • Speechless ,well composed Samannya…Keep it up…

    Anuj Dey
  • It’s so mesmerising samanya keep the words moving so flawlessly God bless you

    Sanjay mehrotra moradabad
  • The composition is an indicator of not only your talent but it depicts internal churning going inside you.
    Keep expressing.
    God bless

    Yogi Maindiratta
  • Very well composed nd beautifully written …….keep it up ?

    Pooja mehrotra
  • Good One

    Rajdeep Rawal
  • Amazing and beautiful.

    Veerendra
  • Beautiful composition with simple words and deep routed meaning. Good show. Keep it up. God bless.

    Amrit
  • Beautiful composition. Keep it up.

    Yogita
  • Great expression of thoughts with simple words……..way to go….keep it up Samanya
    God bless

    Rajeev Lohani
  • Wonderful & meaningful composition Samanya , keep it up . All the best ??

    Pankaj sarswat
  • Well composed Samanya!

    Balaji
  • Unimaginable thinking power of children.Keep it up.

    Vp ashish
  • Very well written….Keep up the good work

    Mayank Awasthi
  • Dammnn. This is so amazing samanyaa. So well composed. ???

    Harshita
  • WOWOW this is so amazing ??❤️❤️❤️❤️??

    Thotslayer6969

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