DEAR LOVE

Tanvi Nagar

Dear love, I have always wanted to understand you more,
But first of all, you must know you are the one who I most adore.
Dear love, will you stand by me through the most rugged journeys of all?
Dear love, as years pass by will you be there still standing strong?
When there’s solitude that surrounds like the charcoal darkness of night,
Will you be there, like a solid rock strong by my side?
When gloom envelopes me, when pain is only what I feel,
Will a single touch of yours make my wounds and scars heal?
Dear love, when my life is nothing but a misty, smoky mirror,                              
Will you be the sunlight and beat life’s grey weather?
Dear love, when the sprinkler of affection waters our gardens of destiny,
Will you be treading upon this path with me as zestfully?
Dear love, when distaste is the only thing that binds us,
Will in our relationship arise a sense of distrust? 
Dear love, life will put forward tests, how many would you beat?
Would circumstances change, would they be bleak?
Without words would only my silence be enough to communicate?
Would we know what destiny stores for us, our fate?
Dear love, when I’m absorbed in the deepest of darkness,
Will you still love and not consider me wicked and heartless?
Dear love, when we are separated by the barriers of cold war,
With all your heart and soul, will I be the one who you adore?
When my glass hopes and dreams are shattered and I bleed at heart,
Remember life and death can not tear us apart,
Once soul mates, we will always have a single heart,
Having a single soul, we’ll live together, together we’ll depart,
Our souls are united forever, regardless of storms or thunder,
Our’s is just an ordinary story of two extraordinary lovers. 

38 comments

  • Thanks Sir!

    Tanvi Nagar
  • What words for a young child. Excellent

    P.P.V. Kapoor
  • Thanks U!!

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Kya baat hai. Deep words. well done
    affectionately
    U

    Uishat Zehram Behroom Fazool
  • Thank you so much, Ram and Rohit for your words. They mean a lot to me.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Someone who understands the value of love I wish could write like you little…

    Rohit Purohit
  • I think I feel as much what this poem signifies
    Lovely piece 💓💗💞💐

    Ram
  • Thanks

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Well done….as always well done!!@@TanviNagar

    Lollz5762
  • Thank you Mansi!! Your feedback means a lot to me.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Hi Tanvi!
    I saw your poem in Times of India NIE. I must say I am deeply touched by your words. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us!
    Keep up the good work!

    Mansi
  • Thank you, Sharad Kamal Bezboruah. I have been writing since 5-6 years now.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Wonderfully done. How long have you been writing?

    Sharad Kamal Bezboruah
  • Thank you, Phuphaji.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Very nice Tanvi, your words are getting more powerful

    B B.Bhargava
  • Thanks Shreya Bansal.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Hey Tanvi.
    Great poem I love the rhythm in it and the questions that go side by side. Like it. Good work.

    Shreya Bansal
  • Thank you Sumita Aunty. It was great to hear your words.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Your age does not prohibit your depth of a great feeling .You have gathered all nuances of love’s journey through the thick and thin of the unpredictability of life!!More power to you Tanvi!!!!

    Sumita Bhargava
  • Thank you Prerna Ma’am

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Beautifully worded tanvi nagar. This is great work.

    Prerna
  • Thank you Varun bro! Loved your comment because it means a lot to me.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Thank you, Aditya. That’s a great idea!

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Thank you, Hakim.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Thank you, Anjali Aunty.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Thank you, Dimpy Aunty.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Thank you Sakshi Ma’am

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Thank you, Monica Aunty.

    Tanvi Nagar
  • Tanvi dear, reading your poem is always a delight. Your ‘Dear Love’ is yet again another masterpiece. Love you as always.

    Monica Gautam
  • Wow Tanvi!! Loved the magical simplicity….It was so meaningful. I could connect heart to heart.

    Sakshi Ranjan
  • So well written?Enjoyed reading ?Keep it up ??

    Dimpy
  • So well written?Enjoyed reading ?Keep it up ??

    Dimpy
  • Loved and lived the poem Tanvi, the feelings were so beautifully worded, you will surely go a long way,much love

    Anjali Kesarwani
  • Very meaningful Poem full of Love

    Aman
  • Very meaningful Poem full of Love

    Aman
  • Hey Tanvi
    What a great poem this is. Love the effort put into it. Great job done !!!

    Varun
  • Hey tanvi nagar ,
    I don’t know why but i have this feeling after reading your poem that you can be a good songwriter if you give it a shot . It might sound vague but yeah, you must .

    Aditya
  • I liked the numerous question that go along with the first feelings of love in our mind coz the heart can’t be tamed…this is a lovely piece for the same…:)

    'hakim'

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